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Thank you everyone for all of your advice! It's been extremely helpful in helping me write these scenes. I realise that I didn't make it clear at all that these two scenes are set in entirely different places at different times (monster attacks MC and then is teleported to another city where it...

This is a great idea! And it would definitely raise the stakes too. I might try something like that. You make a strong point: it's probably not necessary to show the WHOLE chase scene with those guards, but it's necessary in part because it: 1. introduces other characters 2. it...

Hello everyone, I'm looking for advice on a my novel I'm trying to write and I realise there's just too many chase scenes. I have a wizard and his companion who have escaped from jail and they're being chased by two guards - so they're obviously being chased by them. And then a monster...