Bearman1
Scribe
Hi Guys,
Throughout my WIP one of my MC has always fascinated me. He is quiet and an outsider and I have spent the first 10 chapters of my story highlighting how he is bullied but does not let it get to him.
He's mentally tough but physically weak. Most of the time he simply takes his bullies' punishment and moves on with his life. But every so often he will break out and get angry in a fit of rage. Its been as if this aggression and anger is bubbling under the surface.
So when he gets left behind in an escape away from a beastial monster who happens to serve a god, his entire life changes.
He gets taken over by this god, and the idea is he gets corrupted and all of his rage and aggression gets brought to the surface.
I want to write this as a gradual change, where he slowly spirals out of control. But I am not too sure how to write that. I don't want it drag on and on, with little happening. And yet, I don't want him to just suddenly change his character.
Any suggestions or recommendations on how to go about this development?
Thanks,
Throughout my WIP one of my MC has always fascinated me. He is quiet and an outsider and I have spent the first 10 chapters of my story highlighting how he is bullied but does not let it get to him.
He's mentally tough but physically weak. Most of the time he simply takes his bullies' punishment and moves on with his life. But every so often he will break out and get angry in a fit of rage. Its been as if this aggression and anger is bubbling under the surface.
So when he gets left behind in an escape away from a beastial monster who happens to serve a god, his entire life changes.
He gets taken over by this god, and the idea is he gets corrupted and all of his rage and aggression gets brought to the surface.
.................
I want to write this as a gradual change, where he slowly spirals out of control. But I am not too sure how to write that. I don't want it drag on and on, with little happening. And yet, I don't want him to just suddenly change his character.
Any suggestions or recommendations on how to go about this development?
Thanks,