Ireth
Myth Weaver
I'm having some serious issues getting the plot to go in the direction I want it to go, and it's all my characters' fault. I'll explain it in brief:
-Olan, a young vampire, has left home and gone to find a new one. He finds Eilean Donan castle, sees that it's (apparently) empty, and decides to stake his claim on it.
-Aileen, a young ghost lingering in Eilean Donan, is not happy to have her home invaded by a vampire. In spite of the language barrier between her and Olan, they manage to work out a bargain, and Olan is allowed to stay in the castle for three days.
-On the evening of the second day, Olan finds Ciaran, an older blood-drinker. Ciaran is alone and traumatized after being violently blinded and dumped in the wilderness to fend for himself. Olan takes Ciaran to the castle to get him cleaned up, but there is a problem: Ciaran needs time to heal emotionally and physically, and Olan thinks Ciaran should stay in one place (i.e. the castle) so Olan can look after him, but to do so would break his word to Aileen. Ciaran is also reluctant to be there when Olan tells him of Aileen.
-Aileen sees the two of them in the castle and gets angry, demanding to know who Ciaran is and whether he plans to stay. Ciaran reveals to Olan that he is the one who killed Aileen some 150 years before, which is why he did not want to stay. He then tells Aileen his name, but she does not recognize him as her killer.
So, my dilemma is this: Olan and Ciaran both need to stay in the castle with Aileen in order for the plot to go where I want it, but it would go against character for Aileen to let them stay, or for either of the vampires to stay there against Aileen's wishes. Olan needs Ciaran to translate between him and Aileen, and Ciaran needs Olan to look after him as he recovers. But Aileen, who hates vampires (and with good reason), just wants them to go away. I want her to befriend the vampires, but that will take a matter of months, if not years, while they slowly build trust. That can't happen if she kicks them out. I'm not sure how to keep them all where I want them without it seeming contrived. The setting is also quite important to the later plot, so I can't just have them all move elsewhere.
Thoughts and comments are appreciated. Thanks!
-Olan, a young vampire, has left home and gone to find a new one. He finds Eilean Donan castle, sees that it's (apparently) empty, and decides to stake his claim on it.
-Aileen, a young ghost lingering in Eilean Donan, is not happy to have her home invaded by a vampire. In spite of the language barrier between her and Olan, they manage to work out a bargain, and Olan is allowed to stay in the castle for three days.
-On the evening of the second day, Olan finds Ciaran, an older blood-drinker. Ciaran is alone and traumatized after being violently blinded and dumped in the wilderness to fend for himself. Olan takes Ciaran to the castle to get him cleaned up, but there is a problem: Ciaran needs time to heal emotionally and physically, and Olan thinks Ciaran should stay in one place (i.e. the castle) so Olan can look after him, but to do so would break his word to Aileen. Ciaran is also reluctant to be there when Olan tells him of Aileen.
-Aileen sees the two of them in the castle and gets angry, demanding to know who Ciaran is and whether he plans to stay. Ciaran reveals to Olan that he is the one who killed Aileen some 150 years before, which is why he did not want to stay. He then tells Aileen his name, but she does not recognize him as her killer.
So, my dilemma is this: Olan and Ciaran both need to stay in the castle with Aileen in order for the plot to go where I want it, but it would go against character for Aileen to let them stay, or for either of the vampires to stay there against Aileen's wishes. Olan needs Ciaran to translate between him and Aileen, and Ciaran needs Olan to look after him as he recovers. But Aileen, who hates vampires (and with good reason), just wants them to go away. I want her to befriend the vampires, but that will take a matter of months, if not years, while they slowly build trust. That can't happen if she kicks them out. I'm not sure how to keep them all where I want them without it seeming contrived. The setting is also quite important to the later plot, so I can't just have them all move elsewhere.
Thoughts and comments are appreciated. Thanks!