Storm Kesocascay
Minstrel
I my second book, "The Night and Day", my main character, Arylos, has to teach my secondary character, Iris, how to perform Alchemy in order to advance in divine-hood. The Alchemy that Arylos and the rest of the gods use is far different than most Alchemy used in Kaiyumi so he has to teach her both styles and their differences. During the tutoring sessions, how much detail should I use? Should I use Iris having long periods of trial and error and Arylos using as much detail and going down to the bare bones of the styles (which I fear could bore the reader) or use some detail, but not too much or just have their tutoring sessions behind the scenes (which I fear will leave important stuff out)?