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  1. A. E. Lowan

    What Does Good Omniscient POV look like?

    Totally forgot I had a point to this. lol In the bolded, I'm leaning in on the Unreliable Narrator hard. You can totally do this with 1st or Omniscient, but it takes a tiny amount of more effort. Here, Alerich has some thoughts and suspicions about Stephen, but I don't want him on that...
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    What Does Good Omniscient POV look like?

    Wasn't he that one guy who did a thing and now Hannibal, Missouri is famous. Highly recommend the winery. Last known refuge of Winchell's Donuts. Also there may be a cave. It's a good cave, too. We've got rather a fair bit of limestone, here at the bottom of the shallow, primordial sea. But...
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    What Does Good Omniscient POV look like?

    I tend to default to 3rd Limited, in part because messing around with the reader is one of my favorite things. All hail the Unreliable Narrator! So, I've got tons of examples of that. but this is probably the only thing using Omniscient that I have in a condition to show off. This was also our...
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    What Does Good Omniscient POV look like?

    It looks like god or whatever is telling the story. Think about how 3rd Limited is like having a camera inside the narrator's head. In Omniscient the camera is above the action and has total freedom of movement. The voice is also always the same. There are no heads to hop to, barring changing up...
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    Story Fuel: The Princess Dress Edition

    Uh... As the lady riding the Black Knight's arm at the ball is a poisoner of rare skill and a wizard of rarer cunning, I think we'll skip that and just tell her she looks ravishing in red, and pregnancy just enhances her glow. Also, have a cookie or maybe the whole platter? You deserve it, my queen.
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    Writing in tense situations

    Finishing is not what makes one a writer. Writing does. All else is process. Some processes are slower than others. Keep at it. Eventually, you'll find your way to The End.
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    Story Fuel: The Princess Dress Edition

    I'm writing a masquerade ball in this book, so I've been a bit dress-obsessed of late. lol Our characters are going as Lewis Carroll characters. One is noticeably pregnant, 20 weeks with big twins, so she's going as Alice in sexy maternity wear and the one who's knocked her up is the "Bad Hatter."
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    How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?

    I love this breakdown. Well thought out.
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    How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?

    I don't have issues with, "said.' It's a tool in the toolbox, like everything else. Most of the time it's invisible to all but the most... I should say diligent but really, precious and nitpicky come more naturally to mind. Note: I am exactly that nitpicker, The Evil Queen of Why, and I am...
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    Story Fuel: The Princess Dress Edition

    Just a sweet little AI video that features fantasy dresses. Since we write this stuff all the time, I thought someone may need it, too.
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    Does your family joke about how much money your book is going to make them?

    And also, no, i don't get that tease all that often. In part because I'm intimidating, and in part because my mom would have cut someone, had they the temerity to go after the woman who taught me how to writer.
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    Is it odd that my characters are far more 'animated' than I am?

    No, I think it's perfectly normal. I'm also autistic and am perfectly capable of writing a wide variety of ways of being. So, we do have some autists, but we also have neurotypicals and no few characters who aren't human, have never been human, and never will be. They think differently, as well...
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    Do you ever just wanna, hang out with your characters?

    I do it all day long. Fairly sure the lot's about to take out orders of protection against me. Teach them to read the outlines.
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    Too Many files!

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