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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    Oh wow! This is perfect! I never knew about something like this!
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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    I suppose making a border would be a wait until later thing🤔 the desert does have mountainous borders around it anyway, nobody really made claims on it…I guess the main focus should be on the water system and building everything up
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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    I know that setting things up for the people is very important, but realistically…should borders be the first thing set up after housing and other things or something else?
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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    So this is time period would be considered pretty modern, but my goddess is slowly introducing more advanced things since her people are from an island originally. The mining sources around the kingdom are plenty full and their fishing is plenty top tier. I had an idea how she builds relations...
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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    Oh the oasis thing is definitely happening! I just wonder how to establish relations, I mean I have an idea for one, but she kinda just pops up in uncharted land and sets up a kingdom. I wonder if that would appear threatening to them, especially if it’s built relatively quick
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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    So my plan was to have her form a river going through the entire kingdom towards the ocean. It would be a water system that she created that flows from the castle she is going to have built. I also had plans for floating islands of water scattered throughout too. Water and fertile soil wouldn’t...
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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    I mean…I thought of Egypt when building it and she was from Egypt once upon a time. I figured it would be familiar for her since she used to be a princess. Although she is a goddess, she isn’t the build something from nothing type, she would do this organically and probably call some assistance...
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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    So my character is a goddess of water so water should be fine lol. She also has a lot of money that she can pour into this place whenever she wants. As for trade, they do find some lucrative mining caves and the ocean that borders the land has some exotic fish that they will sell.
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    Building a kingdom tips/help

    So…my character is building a kingdom from scratch. A bit of backstory…she is isolating herself from her friends in a self exile sort of way. So she comes across a race of people imprisoned in some caves, she frees them and she plans to give them a good life. So my question is…how does she build...
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    Character help

    So you think a conversation is all it would take? This is a good take honestly. I’ve never written something like this so I want to be as careful and gracious with it like anything else. I would hate for people to think I’m doing this for other reasons other than wholesomeness😒 I just imagine...
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    Character help

    Hello hello! I was hoping someone could give advice about writing a budding relationship between a throuple. So a bit of backstory…my characters are dragons and they can assume human forms. So the couple, Mithra and Kaladion have been together for well over 400 years give or take. Mithra is...
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    Making a fantasy court system

    This has been very very helpful and I have a pretty good idea about what I’m going to do now! Everyone has been really patient and helpful and I’m beyond thankful! I’ve always been shy and protective of my stories so actually asking and receiving help has been enlightening! I’m glad I came to...
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    Making a fantasy court system

    No it still exists. Usually the children of that God would take over or another God will be assigned to this task.
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    Making a fantasy court system

    Sorry if this is confusing you, but the evil god, who is my big bad, does not follow these rules. This is more for the other gods and sometimes mortals who meddle with the affairs of Gods. I meant this thread was more for them, not my big bad. My 10 commandments thing is the set of rules I’m...
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    Making a fantasy court system

    My Creator God is merciful at times, but if the act is very bad than there is a heavy price that will be paid. One extreme punishment for the Gods is complete erasure. The Creator God completely erases them as if they never existed. Gone from memories, bibles and books, the whole nine yards...
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