Question for all. I am a practicing fantasy writer. I have just began a short story. Judging from the short passage below, should I keep writing? Comments are appreciated.
John is a reckless space mercenary captain who is drunk half of the time, but is competent at what he does.
John woke...
Hello All,
My name is Bryan, and I am a practicing fantasy writer. I have written about two hundred words for a short story, and I would like to know if someone can critique it for me, to make sure I am on the right track.