Recent content by BeigeCerberus

Hello y'all A friend of mine has recently put the first few chapters of his debut work avaliable online to help build an audience for its publications. Now I'm the one saying this because, sadly, he's too shy to advertise himself and I have no tact... The book is, in my opinion, a...

I like the idea for your race being more alien. Maybe presumptuous, but I'd assume they first came into being far away from the others to explain the differences, where the others would have more of a similar origin to one another. And your race sound like a fun group :D but races like that...

My cities are big, sealed walled affairs, each self governed and a bastion against the not so nice outside world. The cities are large, multi tiered and ancient. also lots of plants :D

it's a lil' cheesy, but they have been used well throughout history, and have a record of being effective. it's easy enough to hide under something like a rug or splitting floor - especially if its in an industrial thing (think like a mechanical door on the floor). I'd recommend handling the...