• Welcome to the Fantasy Writing Forums. Register Now to join us!

Recent content by brokethepoint

  1. B

    alternating views

    Thank you for the suggestions, I will have to go through some of those.
  2. B

    alternating views

    Yes, fantasy please.
  3. B

    What is Important?

    For my day job their big failure is not looking at supposed short term savings against long term costs. So the question is, do you write for short or long term financial success. For long term financial success (which is how I see financial success) it will require a quality to the writing...
  4. B

    alternating views

    I figured someone would bring up Game of Thrones, but that just isn't what I am looking for.
  5. B

    A Question on Male Gaze

    This right here is the important part, her trapping her locks has a lot of meaning that is shown by that simple action. The eyes are the window to the soul and she is hiding.
  6. B

    Was this idea doomed from the start?

    You could have him confronted by a Native American that truly follows their beliefs.
  7. B

    alternating views

    I am looking for a good book that has the pov of the hero/good and villain/bad. I can't think of any written like this at the moment, but I have probably read a few like that. So any good suggestions :)
  8. B

    A statistical analysis of common fantasy writing mistakes

    When I think of the self pub world I think about how large it is so I wondered, how does he choose his books. When you look at the page it seems like the books he reads are those that authors submit, so the question is what writer would send his book to him to see if it could pass his test?
  9. B

    The tool I needed

    I have been having a hard time getting my words down, the stories have been rattling around and causing all kinds of havoc inside my head. Much of the problem was related to when and where I wanted to write and the inability to do it. I had taken to pen and paper but I could just not do it...
  10. B

    A statistical analysis of common fantasy writing mistakes

    I found it an interesting article, I would like to see a comparison with books published the big names.
  11. B

    Is Traditional Publishing an Increasingly Bad Deal?

    I think the first thing that needs to be done is to sit down and look at what your goals are for you writing career/hobby. We need to realize that big 5, small press and self pub are tools that we use to attain our goal. Each of them have good and bad points, use them to your advantage. I am...
  12. B

    A Novel Beginning

    I thought the article was pretty good, although like everything else the rules can be broken. The thing is it is a matter of skill, I think someone with skills can take a cliche and really make it work. Now if I was a crime writer my challenge would be to start a story with someone squinting...
  13. B

    On NOT Hiring an Editor (Interview)

    If you dig through some of the articles, it looks like he has an editing service. Sorta puts things into perspective.
  14. B

    16. Steven Brust Discussion

    I read the sample of "The Phoenix Guard" and for me the amount of details was too much. I picked up "Dragon" and it seems to be written in a different style, but it couldn't hold my attention.
  15. B

    Why all the elves?

    I would consider D&D and WH as a different category, would be pointless if it didn't have elves and dwarves and gnomes and halflings, oh my.
Top