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    Race creation.

    that is a fair point and think i will change to flint weapons thanks for the input.
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    Race creation.

    Caniskin Physical appearance. • Wolf like appearance (Fur, ears, rear legs, jaw, teeth, muzzle.) • However they possess long arms with clawed fingers and thumbs allowing them to use tools. • The length of their arms allows them to run on all fours by stooping closer to the ground. • Fur colour...
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    Race creation.

    yes that's perfect i think a sparsely forested area would be perfectly for them. i will just organize details thanks again.
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    Race creation.

    That's a great point. I had considered that they had origins in the forest but never gave it much more thought that that. This will require some consideration thanks for bringing this up. If anyone as any ideas i would graciously take them into consideration.
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    Race creation.

    greetings i am sorry for not replying sooner i didn't realize that this had increased to two pages. To update those who are interested i have taken the criticism to heart and realized that it makes several very valid points and i have attempted to resolve these. Firstly i have increased their...
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    Race creation.

    harsh but i am grateful none the less and will take this into consideration it is still a work in progress after all. Additionally it seems you have knowledge of locomotion among other useful topics that i would love to tap into so that i could improve my race. For starters i would like to fix...
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    Race creation.

    This is my latest version of the race. (further advice is welcome) Caniskin Physical appearance. - Wolf like appearance (Fur, ears, rear legs, tail, jaw, teeth, muzzle.) with human like hands and arms however they too are covered in fur and have clawed finger tips. - Fur colour and length...
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    Race creation.

    Thanks Feo Takahari this is something i didn't consider much because of their animalistic nature but they are more than just animals and this would be something good for me to consider. And Little Storm Cloud this is exactly what i was hoping for thank your for the depth I hope to implement...
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    Race creation.

    I am attempting to create a new fantasy race for a story i am planning. What is important for a fantasy race? (eg physical description.) What i have so far is this and i would like help developing it further. Caniskin - Can live in almost any environment but usually avoid the hottest...
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