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That sound very interesting with your characters. The six main characters in my book have flaws, as well as traits(despite the special abilities) Vehren has a superiority complex, he wants to be better than his father and brother, and also has a problem when someone contradicts him(he is the...

that is true, and I also like that, but also don't you think that the classic protagonist thing is sort of, i dunno, boring? the protagonists are always the best and pure good and they thrive in the end with a happy ending where they defeated the evil and lived in ideal condition until another...

Probably because classic storytelling revolves around the protagonist fighting his demons and overcoming them. I wrote a novel way back about a warrior commander who mislead his troops and made mistakes and in the end turns to cowardice and escapes his punishment like that. I was so happy to...

Yes you are right, it is a purely masculine/strength physical thing i am posting of. The characters in my book are 5 young boys and 1 girl that are going through a warrior path that every kid must complete in order to become full pledged warriors. According tp the genetics and lore of the world...

well, on my world(which is a different planet far away from earth) there are no years, but frosts. If a planet/moon is tidally locked, then they must have a different time measure. If there are no days or nights, how do they keep track of time? maybe by growth? " my mother died when my hair...

Sorry, I changed the sentences, now it says "in opposition" not "in addition" anymore. It means that the world around them, mainly other characters, antagonists or other people have a similar stance( example: in LOTR, Frodo is weak compared to even the most low level orcs, and he would win in a...

Thinking, planning, writing...got me questioning. In anime usually the protagonist is unbelievably strong, or he/she is not. I kinda like it when the protagonist finds his great power hidden beneath, revealed in the right time(sometimes a second too late), but sometimes the story isn't like...

Honeycomb liquor, mapuhel stew, smoked hoof, stewed eagle eggs with honey, fried wingfish with beet salad, salted mapuhel cheese with black bread and of course the number one elite dish in Frostland is minced horn marrow from a ridgegoat with blue wine.

where are the chapters? I would like to read them :)

If you think of giving them a word to express their culture, then make it similar to their words but not the same, or create a new word. It would be very confusing to me if I was reading a book and something like that happened. Like: 2 Dragon Kins are surprises by Faye. Dk1: Faye! What shall we...

How about the leader releases only 25 men back and keep 75 men ( 25 old and 50 new ) with a promise of better pay or something like that? And while waiting, try to gain intel on the enemy somehow?

I have several characters that have their own looks. "beauty" isn't a universal thing where they live, rather each person looks different depending on where they live. For instance, on the far north in Garlin, a typical "handsome" greenmare has furry pointy ears, and they are big and strong. The...

I did a thing a couple of months ago, went online and found a fantasy ai character where you cam create your character using suggestions, and it was fun when you make a character and then talk to them. But the free ai is not really smart, it cant remember vital argument points and just...

Thank you, I really do hope it will be published, even if not, it will be available online for sure :)

thank you, I mean I shall extend your gratitude to her :D