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  1. Death

    How can I maintain a zombie workforce in good working condition for the purposes of e-commerce?

    I would say maybe give them some sort of reinforcement like heat protection or if you can't at least keep what you need for summoning them close by
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    How to Build a Diabolical Cult

    Did Cerulean create the Veil?
  3. Death

    How to Build a Diabolical Cult

    Is the Veil an entity or something else
  4. Death

    How much violence is too much?

    I agree with Mad Swede. Violence and combat is an essential part of the story, but it is important to weave in other elements, like royalty, politics
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    How to Build a Diabolical Cult

    Makes sense. She gets along with all of them? I would think the MC would argue with one if she finds out about it.
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    A new idea brings new world build potential! An idea for magic

    I like that, but do they gain the "bad attributes" of the gods, like selfishness or greediness/ That could allow people who eat too much to become evil. And what happens if they eat more than one "grain of a god"?
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    How to Build a Diabolical Cult

    I think you should also have some sort of otherwordly leader and someone you thought was a friend to be high in the cult.
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