Recent content by Delacrose

Holla! Just wondering if anyone has any advice or experience that could help me with a character who has broken his Femur. It was caused by a high pressure fall and he also has a laceration in the same leg on the thigh muscle. thankfully it misses the major artery but he still stuffers high...

Well I guess I depends on what you are cooking. For sourdough, yes leave it so it can consolidate. Pull apart, no, because you want it warm.

Yes, as above. Best to leave pull apart for 10 -20 if you want it warm to eat. But if want it totally room temp let it sit for 40. I used to work in a bakery and that's how long we left pull apart's. Thinker loafs are best left for a full hour so as not to ruin the dough when cutting.

Wow! Amazing. I wish i could draw this well - so wonderful to see your characters come to life!

I agree with comments on transitions. An arrive late and leave early tactic can sometimes lead to jarring transitions but I don't think that's always a bad thing. Less is always more - every words must tell right? So if the lead in, for example your character walking into a building to go to a...