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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.It's one of those things, it's hard to tell if it's working without seeing it. -
Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.It's hard as hell to catch sometimes, most risky for me when writing one POV with another POV character in the scene, LMAO. That feels...
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I did that in 'Exiles: Pilgrimage.' One of the characters settled down with her toddler in a human village (the only one for thousands...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.I'm not even sure what you mean... you can pack years into a sentence or pages into a few moments. The example sentence seems fairly...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.That would be why I don't watch videos unless it's for a repair on something, LMAO. It stymies my brain how much time people waste on...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.IMO, it's a bit misunderstood, like Show Don't Tell™. Here's my take: real HeadHopping™ isn't 3rd Omniscient like Dune, it is...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Mixing first and third person?.The Name of the Wind is framed for a third person/first person as I recall. Without details I don't know what you're actually doing. I...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Mixing first and third person?.This totally depends on the frame. In my upcoming War of Seven Lies, some chapters will be written blending 1st, 2d, and 3rd, along with...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread AI, assistance, how much is too much.If it works as a traditional grammar/spelling checker, which most of these really are, then no issue to me. I allow nothing beyond hard...
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When even Ban thinks its too much...
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Demesnedenoir reacted to Naruzeldamaster's post in the thread How much is too much worldbuilding? with
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If it makes you feel better, I 'kind' of invented a 'god' language in my story. But it's not really fleshed out either. The stuff that... -
Demesnedenoir replied to the thread How much is too much worldbuilding?.I don't bother worrying about whether people will pronoucce the words right, because I know many won't. And that's cool. I give...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread How much is too much worldbuilding?.I haven't actually used it in text, and I don't really know if I will, but there would certainly be instructions for clicks if I go that...
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread How much is too much worldbuilding?.Well, I was going berserk at this point using Zulu for a bit of inspiration with three clicks: dental, alveolar, and lateral. For now, I...
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I'm in the same rabbit hole, but more tame. Practically creating an English-Arabic hybrid and trying to making sounds shifts from South...