I used breaking and reading bones with symbols and a lot of uncertainty and interpretation... and cheating. A prepared bone is carved with symbols and whatnot, and a hot steel needle is driven into the bones by the oracle to form the cracks that are read. A technique called "smoothing the bone"...
Those programs will pull up every piece of dialogue from a single character in a 250k word novel? AI isn't perfect at it, but it's quite good. Scrivener CAN do it, but yikes, what a pain in the ass. It isn't so much whether there are no AI tools (and how long before AI is involved?) that work...
Your interpretation of grammar is off. You can correct grammar with AI without changing your voice, unless your voice uses incorrect grammar, which, as a whole, would be bad unless you're working, maybe, on something like A Clockwork Orange... and then, with AI, you can have it stop checking...
I don't have a method; I've been lucid dreaming since I was about 5, best I can recall. The trick is not taking control all the time, as it's exhausting.
I don't do google links. Just post a snippet or email it to me for a brief review. My gut tells me: If you are in classical 3rd Om narrative mode, you're better off than if trying to write in a more modern Limited 3rd and trying to stretch the POV.
I'm not even sure what you mean... you can pack years into a sentence or pages into a few moments.
The example sentence seems fairly normal to me without context or comparison.
That would be why I don't watch videos unless it's for a repair on something, LMAO. It stymies my brain how much time people waste on the damned things.