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  1. Duncan M

    Any astronomers/cosmologists/planetary scientists in the house?

    Hello! Aspiring Astrophysicist here. I'm certainly no expert, but when it comes to moons I'll say the sky is the limit (bad). Since you're looking for a (relatively) large moon orbiting a smaller planet, you may want to consider a tidally-locked planet-moon system, where the moon and planet...
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    Latin translation help

    Any time! The -que thing I've only seen in particular instances, most notably the abbreviation Senatus Populusque Romanum (Senate and People of Rome, or SPQR). I haven't read enough to really comment on the usage, so just go with whichever you prefer. Best of luck with your project. :)
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    Latin translation help

    Principium et Finem works, but there are quite a few ways to say it (if your inner language nerd is interested). My personal favorite would be Principium Terminusque, where the -que is a kind of belated 'and.' :) In terms of capitalization, there would be no need to capitalize the finem...
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    Latin translation help

    H! I could help you out, but it would be best if you could give an exact phrase to translate, as Latin uses many variations of any particular root word to indicate different parts of speech/places in a sentence, etc. For example, the root auxil (help) can form a verb, a noun, or an adjective...
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    Ehvas- Assistance and Feedback on my Initial work

    Very interesting. I would love to see the geography of your world, if you feel like drawing a map or something. These creative ideas deserve quite a bit of development.
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    Introducing characters in the "traditional" style

    If that's your introduction, it seems quite effective. The mental image it produces is a fine starting point in my opinion. If your reviewer was going for a few sentences or a paragraph dedicated to the looks/preferences/behavior of your character, I'd have to disagree with him. Introductions...
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    My Zodiac/Astrological system...

    This is all very interesting, and there's a thousand and some ways you could tie this into your world. Perhaps it would help to envision religious ceremonies. Maybe there are shrines and temples at which blessings/baptisms are performed for children born during the sign. Festivals and feasts...
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    Nations in your world

    *My apologies if my spelling brings tears to your eyes, as I'm not able to install ieSpell on this computer.* Surprisingly, the Earthly component of my own world has only one "race" in the sense of species. There are however several ethnic/racial varieties of Humans, each of which take on...
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