I was in the middle of writing my first novel. i had read some guides about needing others to read and review my book, in order to improve and complete it. I found this website through the great Google in the sky as i was reading more guides about fantasy writing.
In my world evil has won the day and now everything is trying to carry on running but it’s chaotic.
My question is what laws would help create a working world were creatures are basically evil, unmoral, lazy, greedy and ultra violent?
Based on a world that is kind of like LOTR scenario...
my views on the story:
I probably understand you want to write about something new and that it may a challenge, but be wary of the pitfalls.
just don't be surprised if people have a go at you for it.
if its going to be a love story why not place it in a time when it was socially...
i am not really sure why you put so much thought into the wings because vampires in stories can turn to mist and change into wolves. day light so i take it that they don't die in day light?
Like the idea but have you thought about the ending and how it would carry on?
What would be the characters goal in the book? (sounds like he enjoys being powerful)
Do all Revenant have the same powers or are you the special one; if so how did that come to be?