Recent content by Eddric

What's the stage above a Baba Yaga, and how would it benefit the members to make sure she gets there? Are there classes of gods? Could the Baba Yaga instill a sort of hypnotic allegiance onto her followers?

I have a designed magic system, that I'll post about later, as it is large. The topic here are Witches in my story. Witches are women only (for the sake of this post, just go with that, there is a lot to my world/story). The vast majority of people in this world are born with Witch...

Their magic always seems vague, so I can (potentially) use that to my advantage. Many times they come from a different realm, allowing for secrets to remain secret and I don't really have to put any work into explaining them. They are secretive as a whole and can come and go as I need them too...

There's only so much one can do with brooms or vacuums space-wise. Too much customization might make actual flying difficult. Perhaps different colors, types of wood, material for bristles, spells carved in to produce different effects and such.

Could be something like ingesting the heart of another witch would actually be detrimental instead of helpful. Once there is so much mana within a heart, it becomes toxic. Think of it like eating a banana, great source of potassium, but ingesting pure potassium would be poisonous and cause great...

It kind of reminds me of Brandon Sanderson and his Mistborn. I like it, it's very detailed. My only questions are, what is the mystery? What is the secret that is hidden about the abilities, how can it be exploited or experimented on? What is left to discover about it that the government and/or...

Hey guys! New here. I'm looking forward to talking with others and getting some feedback on my story and world. There's a lot to it, so I'll work on that later, but I'm excited to talk with other like minded people!