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    The Soldiers Prayer to Saint Michael Saint Michael the Archangel, defend us in battle. Be our...

    The Soldiers Prayer to Saint Michael Saint Michael the Archangel, defend us in battle. Be our protection against the wickedness and snares of the devil. May God rebuke him, we humbly pray; and do Thou, O Prince of the Heavenly Host - by the Divine Power of God - cast into hell, satan and all...
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    The Soldiers Prayer ...Now I lay me down to sleep...one less terrorist this world does...

    The Soldiers Prayer ...Now I lay me down to sleep...one less terrorist this world does keep...with all my heart I give my thanks...to those in uniform regardless of ranks...you serve our country and serve it well...with humble hearts your stories tell...so as I rest my weary eyes...while freedom...
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    Theft of Swords?

    Got ahold of the Book the other day and I am glued to it.
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    Eragon?

    Remember how eragon took away sloan's sight but then paolini forgot about sloan until his grandchild came to the elven forest, and eragon forgot about sloan.......... I couldnt tell if Arya was Eragon's girl or paolini's Dragons with feathers are griffins :)
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    Eragon?

    Agreed it was something that was a horror show for perfect fantasy. But it was a decent shot at least he should be given credit for that. And then he should take some writing grammar lessons or a course in novel writing and then try again with the sequel. I would like him to try again with more...
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    Eragon?

    Altogether I dont know if he really meant to take and copy to his own story line, because I have not spoken with him or heard from him personally, if he did or didn't is not the question. I think the question is as James said "Is he going to do it again if he writes again." Personally I see that...
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    Eragon?

    Elves seem to be a tricky thing, because they have almost it seems like a template. That in order to write something different would be to deviate from what elves should be. Although I do think that this template started with Tolkien, and i dont think anyone else has had an original thought from...
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    Eragon?

    After reading through each of the books I would say that this is pretty accurate. Each Character is over described, and almost seems as if you lose eragon a bit, or that each character adds something to Eragon and it gets a bit redundant at times.
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    The Sniper's Prayer My Spotter who art in Heaven, Hallowed be thy clear sight, and sanctify...

    The Sniper's Prayer My Spotter who art in Heaven, Hallowed be thy clear sight, and sanctify my own, Let me remain unseen, in the watchful eye of my enemy, Thy will be done for this round, Teach me to aim with my Mind, and shoot with my Hand, Forgive me for the trigger I must pull to...
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    Eragon?

    @Cody Amprim I agree with what you say about Fantasy playing a big role in people's live. I have often wondered if the writers who write what they write consider that their works might influence the minds of the Readers, and if they aim to do that particularly or not. I dont know what the aim...
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    Eragon?

    That was a very good article. Thank you Benjamin. Agreed in what Adam in the article says about the Kids who can relate because they have mastered some of the symbols in the book. I can remember back to my old days when I was a kid who would play Knights in the backyard with the sticks I made...
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    Favorite Creatures in Fantasy

    That dude has an Imagination that is unlike anyone else in the world. The things he comes up with are amazing in every category.
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    Favorite Creatures in Fantasy

    For me right now. With the little Fantasy that I have read I think there are several. The Griffin I think has always been my favorite from the Start. The WereWolves in Stuart Hill's Trilogy are interesting. But I think the one Fantasy Creature that has always been an interest to read about has...
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    Theft of Swords?

    Sounds like an Interesting Book just requested it through My Library but it has not come out yet. Looking forward to reading it during my Semester break.
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    How do you read?

    I have the misfortune of only being able to read one book at a time. I am not a book worm, I am a book TRAIN! Once i get into a book I can plow through it, to the point I will be constantly reading it often till 2 am in the morning (especially for fantasy.) Hard to say, how many books in a...
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