The Cloak Button of Ouranía.
Well, I'm excited to read about it! By the way, moon falling to earth and breaking up the pre-fall supercontinent (like a shooter marble smacking...
Well, Earth's total surface area is about 200 million square miles; Earth's total land area is about 58 million square miles or 30%. Your flat...
Right! Got carried away with that!
For an easy experiment, get rid of that "size of the UK" notation. Then, if your planet is Earth-sized, get a ruler and figure out the scale of...
I know about bronze cannon (the semi-mythical "bombardes" I mention were indeed cast from bronze). I didn't know about the bronze 1911, though....
In The World, flash powders are known of, and there have actually been a couple now semi-mythical bombardes that were said to have actually been...
Yep. From a certain perspective, there simply may not be any way to tell...
I think one of you needs to write that story!
Not a specific criticism, but generally speaking, much will depend on what exactly is meant by "future" here. Sure, seers might see the future,...
Merci! You know I'm going to be on the lookout for that!
Since you liken your story to HP, perhaps consider graduate seminars like Problems in Modern Magic: Thaumic Wave~Particle Theory Applications or...
Sounds good to me! What is it?
Plotholes I don't like, but aren't a deal breaker. For me that's really more a matter of story planning rather than nature of the world. I don't...
Are there any potato or ravioli moons to go with that?
