One of the annoying things about the English language is that there seems to be no word for the period between midnight and dawn. I discovered that Spanish has a word madrugada, but my stories are not set in Spain.
There is the phrase 'small hours', but I want to avoid the word hour -- it would...
Thanks for the helpful and thought-provoking comments!
"Robin Hobb uses first person POV masterfully in the Farseer Trilogy." Another author whose work I need to explore!
"The charm of first person is that you're along for the ride with the protagonist. You're experiencing their story. " Yes...
I have no ambition to be as complex as that! :) A straightforward 1st-person narration like Brideshead Revisited or The King Must Die is what I'm aiming for.
(If I could write half as well as Waugh or Renault, I'd feel very proud of myself.)
First, thank you for your comments. They have helped me to understand why I think the change might work.
"If that insanity works, then 1st is a cakewalk." I can imagine! What is the title of your book? I'd like to read it.
"Oftentimes, 3rd Intimate can damned near be swapped for 1st person,"...
Or perhaps two different narrators, like in 'Left Hand of Darkness'.
But I think, if I do this, I'll stick to one narrator. He can report what other characters tell him about events he hasn't personally witnessed.