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  1. GroundZxero

    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    It's your job to scrutinize my ideas? Wtf? I'm all for criticism but it kinda feels like your attacking me. Thanks for giving a newcomer such a warm welcome. Definitely won't be using this website again
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    Also in terms of God being omnipotent/all powerful and whether or not he allowed himself to fall, i believe you're looking way too deeply into those machinations. That may be due to your religious nature and that's okay. It's just context for how the world came to be, i won't introduce those...
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    I understand where you're coming from, this is just the origin of my world it's not the story itself. Koran is pronounced (Corin) not Quran. Like I said before I don't really want to info dump so I'm just giving you guys a general timeline. The main story is about the current generation of...
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    Oh I know trust me lol just curious as to why people think I shouldn't
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    Got it! I see what you guys are saying now
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    Okay, gotcha, that makes sense. I guess I just want to understand that thought process. Have you not read stories where different religions are used as context? Even though they take place in a fantasy world with a different name?
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    Also this is a world of my own creation. Any high fantasy or d n d type stuff can be thrown out the window.
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    Is there really a problem with using the names lucifer and Eden? The world doesn't have to take place on earth for me to use the names of God, Lucifer or Eden. They are meant to have connection to Christian religion. That's the entire point of me using those names, i've read countless stories...
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    In my world, God is just a All powerful Obelisk of stone and minerals, lucifer essentially pushes "God" over and God falls from Heaven. (I am also Christian, 7th day adventist to be exact) Koran isn't a play on Muslim culture, It's just the name i choose when I was 14 years old lol i do have a...
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    In my world, God is just a All powerful Obelisk of stone and minerals, lucifer essentially pushes "God" over and God falls from Heaven. (I am also Christian, 7th day adventist to be exact) Koran isn't a play on Muslim culture, It's just the name i choose when I was 14 years old lol i do have...
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    Thanks! This is early civilization stuff. I have some more politics and stuff i'm working on, very much appreciate the feedback!
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    Can I get a second opinion or thoughts?

    Small portion of my world building, wouldn't mind a second opinion Timeline of World Events Ancient Era - Creation of Eden: The world of Eden is created, governed by the divine force known as God, an omnipotent yet immobile obelisk of stone and minerals. - A multiversal being (Outer God)...
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    New here!

    Hello! Not sure exactly how to start, but I’ve been working on a world of my own creation for quite some time now. My goal is to develop it into a book but more than that, I want this world to serve as the setting for many stories across different books and genres. I have a Discord where I have...
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