A.E. Lowen- I wrote 21 chapters of the second part to my first book and also was writing another story before I got very sick. I got a very poisonous toxin in my system ( a couple months ago) and it has effected my CNS. I am driving again and functioning on my own and just started a couple...
Brian, I forgot to ask, in reading only half a page how can you possibly be able to have that many errors found? I am curious as I am new at this. Thank you
Thank you Brian for taking the time out to look it over. I spent year writing it and then another trying to make it better. Apparently I need a new editor to look it over. However, I will also be looking it over and taking your advice, thank you. It really is a great story. It is my first...
True. I also had people who were my worst critics read it, who even don't like that genre. Here is what I got, "I did not like some of the characters and hate that they are vampires, but I will say I could not put the book down." So, the same theme at least by all the readers is they could...
Yes, I did get feedback. "Not what we are looking for at this particular time." Also I have followed all the guidelines of the 30 agents and publishers I have sent to. Even the correct word count :/ I have been submitting for a year. However, I just read that a New York best Seller got to...
Thank you everyone for such great advice! It's all been very helpful and appreciated. A lot of great information as well. I will say that I was told by both publishers and agents that having your novel self published does not effect whether or not they will accept it. :)
The name is "War of...