This seems really cool! Just an addition to the comment above- purely wondering- is Lord Solomon the living embodiment of the dark matter that changed Earth into Thaloria?
These are so good! I've got to admit, "Don't Look At Me" is my favorite because of the strong emotion that it depicts!
I would say, that it's not unhealthy to have a crush on your own character, but I may be biased, since I, too, have had crushes on my own characters!
(Also, great job on...
Hello, Ixris! Nice to meet you, my name's Iris! I don't drink tea or coffee... š I do, however, enjoy lemonade, and like pmmg, I like hot chocolate with whipped cream! I especially enjoy it with a hint of peppermint!
Call this method strange, but perhaps start small and work your way up. By that, I mean starting with writing one chapter at a time, in the simplest form possible. For example:
Bob walked to Jim's house. He talked to Jim. Jim and Bob went to the park.
After writing something like that, slowly...