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    It's a great question to ask. I don't have a good answer. I've never written in this POV style because it seems to be the most...
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    Incanus replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.
    In my view, there is no such thing as an 'in-between' POV--much in the same way that one cannot be wet and dry at the same time. If...
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    Incanus replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.
    Yes, this all makes sense. One reason I was a little unclear about this is that I've never written in omniscient POV, and I adhere to...
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    Incanus replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.
    I'm not 100% clear on what 'head hopping' is, so if there is a clear definition provided at some point, that could be helpful. It makes...
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    Incanus replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.
    He has four story cycles that are usually considered his best stuff. They are: Zothique (the original 'dying earth' setting)...
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    Incanus replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.
    The Howard sample provided in the OP looks to me like a simple case of 'telling' vs. 'showing'. Telling is inherently faster-paced. He...
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    As written, this looks like you typed a grammatically correct sentence into a word processor, so I'm not sure what the issue is. I...
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    Incanus reacted to Zara's post in the thread Mixing first and third person? with Like Like.
    Yeah, me too. I just noticed I'd never read a novel that combined the two. And writing it like that wasn't planned.
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    Incanus replied to the thread Mixing first and third person?.
    I can't say about agents or publishers, but I know I would certainly be wondering what was going on. As described, it sounds like...
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    Incanus replied to the thread Coming up with the plan.
    I partially agree. I would say that big planning scenes are never ONLY about the plan. Which is part of a larger piece of generally...
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    Incanus replied to the thread Elf and Asia Culture.
    In the Osten Ard books by Tad Williams, the immortal Sithi (who are basically elves) are quite obviously derived from Japanese culture...
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    Incanus replied to the thread Coming up with the plan.
    Unless 'plan' is here defined differently than I would image, aren't fantasy stories involving a quest essentially using 'plans'? The...
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    For me, learning and applying structure helped quite a lot. I don’t think I could have completed my rough draft (what I call a...
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