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    Writing wins!

    5 chapters is still impressive! I believe in you!
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    Writing wins!

    I will!
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    Writing wins!

    Thank you!!
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    Writing wins!

    It's such a good feeling! I know exactly what you mean. (And also thank you!)
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    Writing wins!

    Hello all! Hope you're all well. ♥️ Uh, not really a question, just a minor celebration of getting eleven chapters into my novel. I know it's not much, but I struggle with my mental health and it feels huge! I'm learning how to actually apply myself and make myself write everyday instead of...
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    The true story of a 15th-Century sexual assault survivor's quest for justice

    There's something powerful in knowing that it wasn't totally hopeless for women back then. Kind of make me teary-eyed as a survivor. Thanks for sharing!
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    How to set the scene.

    I can't find another way to explain my process, I'm sorry if this doesn't make much sense. 😅 I like to think of it as panning a camera through my scene. So there's a logical start, where we open something significant, or with the character themselves. If the character is moving, the camera...
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    Changing the MC's name after a couple of chapters?

    Haha, that's fair. I may be getting ahead of myself. I want to say readers would understand, but a critique on another story I wrote said that the dialogue was confusing and they couldn't follow who was saying what, even though the scene was between two people and there were only two lines of...
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    Changing the MC's name after a couple of chapters?

    Hello lovely people! So I think I've decided for my MC, Mielli, I want Mielli to be a name she chooses to adopt to better hide while she's on the run. However, whenever there's a POV change I title the chapter that way (eg, the first chapter is now ONE: Liora, followed by two, three, until we...
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    Chapter length?

    Oh, I've seen this before, this is exactly how I write! It actually makes writing as a craft make more sense to me.
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    Chapter length?

    Hello!!! I hope everyone is doing well! So looking at my writing so far, I seem to average at about 1,700 words per chapter...but I'm looking at other people's work online and their chapters are usually 2,500 words plus. Do I need to be fluffing my chapters? I feel like they're economical and...
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    Just had a realisation...

    For sure, for now I'm just writing the third chapter as a third chapter, and then I'll see how the rest of it goes before I get rid of anything. :)
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    Just had a realisation...

    Yeah, absolutely! I'm learning to cut things in my writing, I knew cutting chapters would eventually creep up and get me. But I super agree that everything that my MC has gone through can be revealed throughout CH3 onwards. Part of my outline is "memory" chapters, just a paragraph or half page...
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    Just had a realisation...

    Oh, absolutely! I don't regret the effort, either. It helped me figure out how I write!
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    Just had a realisation...

    Oh yeah, definitely! I'm not stopping because of this, I need to actually finish a first draft lol. It just made my head spin because I put so much effort into the first two chapters. 🤣
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