I completely agree with your assessment. I have just the henchman for the job. I had ignored them because none of my beta readers had any interest in them, but to be fair, the henchman chapters are really rough.
My henchman is a wraith. Since the big bad is a lich who is locked away in a pocket...
I think my problem is that there are too many pieces of candy in the bowl and I want to write all of them :LOL:. I'm almost better off flipping a coin to see which scene I should write and add to the story.
I'm adding in the merchant because I didn't have a good sense of the antagonist through...
I really like this idea. If you pull it off, I can see a lot of potential tragedy in making your savior think her mentor is the real bad guy. I wonder how that will end for them. Will her mentor be killed by the antagonist? Will they stand together in the end? Will they have to have a big long...
I'm working on a story where the group of protagonists are forced together in order to take care of a bandit problem, but end up finding a bunch of dark magic and a lich instead.
I'm working on a scene in the beginning before the group comes together where the problem is shown to the reader...
Hello,
I go by Kyne. I'm 30 years old and I write Fantasy and High Fantasy novels. I am currently working on the third round of edits for a novel I finished back in 2018 and I hope that I will be lucky enough to get to another beta read and formal editing this year with potential for publishing...