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Hi! Is anyone interested in critiquing my work? Mostly for grammar and punctuation errors. Also, I need a reader's perspective while reading the chapters, i.e. if it's boring, unclear, or interesting. There's 10 chapters and each chapter has 700 - 1000 words (mostly 700). Although, the problem...

First part of my story though there's no title yet... https://mythicscribes.com/community/threads/prologue-the-birth-of-the-princess.23138/

Taking this into context, women would probably dominate the society and would be a matriarchal one (although not entirely). Since women are learned and know about the knowhows of land management, yeah. Also since, they will be in charge of granary, treasury, and other important things needed to...

I didn't include any characters yet because I only thought of the concept of the book: an "equal" society where men and women both have roles in society. I also stated that the "equal" is the ideal way people think of it. But in reality, nothing is equal. They might think that everyone has...

I'm only a small nobody author who has no reputation in the industry, I don't want to be sued. I don't know laws that protect authors and literary works so I want to be careful. :) I don't want to be "jkr-sued" because of copyright or trademark. and I don't want to read the book or search about...

Oh :( it's basically what I'm thinking of. PLEASE TELL ME IF THE BOOK YOU'VE READ IS SIMILAR TO THIS LITTLE CONCEPT OF MINE. Though I've said that both genders are equal, it is only equal in terms of: -both have voices in society -both serve the kingdom directly (as a military man and as an...

Hi guys! I have this idea for my (future) work. The setting won't be in Earth, it'll be in entirely diff. world. I want both genders to have same standing in the society as much as possible but I don't want them to "mix" with each other. I want a prejudice or a clear divide on what each gender...

My book is new and has less than chapters as of now. I am looking for someone who can draw still arts of characters and certain locations/places that is necessary in the story. For characters, I have references but I can't put those references together to create the person because I don't have...

I like how you point things out and I've read your whole comment. Thank you for this comment. As a writer, I need to have references and resources to make my story more "realistic" but as a reader, I can't bring myself to read these so-called "references and resources" because the very work irks...

And when it comes to female lead being annoying even though the male lead didn't do anything wrong? IT'S THE JUDGEMENT AND FALSELY ACCUSING THE MALE LEADS (OR ANY OTHER MEN) THAT THEIR PEEPING/HARRASSING THEM! This mostly happens in Chinese Wuxias. Here are some of the only cringe worthy scenes...

There's also those shit male leads (and some potential male leads) who enters the female lead's room in the middle of the night to stare at her or to kiss her on her forehead. DUDE TRESSPASSING!! DUDE PRIVACY!! DUDE RESPECT THE WOMAN!! And the thing I hate most about in this scenarios are the...

There's also plots/dialogues like ... FL: You're bullying me! ML: *smirks* So what? You're my wife FL: *blushes* uwuu i'm his wife uwuuu

AND THERE'S ALSO A SYNOPSIS/DESCRIPTION/PROLOGUE/PROMOTION OF WORKS (MANGAS/MANHUAS/MANHWAS/WEBTOONS) THAT DEPICTS A "STRONG, BRAVE, WOMAN (MOSTLY A WARRIOR OR A KNIGHT) THAT IS BOTH FEARED AND RESPECTED IN NOT ONLY THEIR FIELDS BUT THE WHOLE COUNTRY. BUT ONCE THE PROBLEM ARISES, THERE'S ONLY...

4. Male leads lying to female leads at the start but female leads go "nah, it's in the past!" Which I think is stupid because lies became the foundation of their relationship. Like in Aladdin, when I was a kid I was so for Aladdin but as I grew up I realized how sh*t Aladdin is and how stupid...