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you know what now i want to write a comedy jut so i can use it :P thanks everyone, that was vry helpful. decided not to go with french or english and will definitely check the link provided Lowan!

interesting points. Only need a few sentencs here and there for when MC learns it. Also it is supposed to be pretty similar to human language to some sort... basically alien specy having lived on earth for a few millennia and inadvertently influenced it a bit. o the language has to be somewhat...

Hi so i would like to write an alien language for my world. I a writing in English and was thinking of writing backwards. i can do that in either english or french very easily, its actually my go to way of writing with a pen and paper. do that looks alien enough? what improvements would you...

no longer a newbie... i hope

mmm i m not sure i follow. your suggestion is to just remove the kraken or to redo it from scratch and make a totally different cover? i am okay with both suggestions i am just not sure i understand what you mean :)

Thanks, Josh, Thanks Spires :) will correct that. As for you Spires... there is a kraken and they do go beneath the ocen at some point but its like a little part of the book. Knowing that would you still be disappointed? both exist literally in the book even though i chose it for its symbolism...

First feedback was bigger title so here is update

Okay guys this is the book cover i visualize with my story. My story as a lot of fantstical elements to it but mostly happens in a city in our world. Would you be disappointed with the cover? The cover works perfectly in term of symbolism. I didnt choose it randomly but if you see it, would you...

okay so i thought longer about it so it wouldnt be what you alrady find here is what i came up with Centures can make others under the influence of wrath or they become stonger under the influence of wrath ( I personally prefer the former) orcs they could have their soul linked to stones only...

don't know about the other species but the plant people could maybe harness the power of the sun through their souls?

i like Devor's take on it

Hi guys, Honestly i am not sure this is the right thread for this so if this belongs somewhere else I apologize in advance and will move it to the more adequate board. This is a link to a gofundme page about making bees healthy again. I will be happy if you donate but more importantly please...

lezards, crocodiles, snakes, komodore dragons, salamandres... they are dangerous (at least some of them) yes but what is aversive about them? their scales are so beautiful

that would be a nightmare