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    Question about age gap

    This is off topic of the age thing but something else that never made sense to me in terms of vampires, how the heck do they get an erection without blood flow????
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    Question about age gap

    And when i asked "is it because the immortal looks the same age as teen?" I was trying to come up with a conclusion to my own question, so yes, I did/do think that is why. People don't really question it because they look the same. Most people aren't looking that far into it. Or if they do, they...
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    Question about age gap

    And I'm referring to vampires or immortals that were able to live a fairly "normal" life, not ones that hide most of their life. Say, they've been able to socialize and be around other mortals for most of their life. The thought that an immortal wouldn't be able to retain any new information is...
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    Question about age gap

    You have written a lot, I haven't read it all yet, but the reason I said "there's no way a vampires mental maturity is the same as a young mortals" is because mental maturity is developed by life experiences. Therefore, they'd have to be more mature, mentally. Being 100-1000 years old or however...
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    Summary of my book

    Thank you for your reply. I've said many times now I feel like banging my head on the wall. Lol. I have like 10 characters all together i think but right now POV are only from 5 i think. And its not all the time, only when i feel its important to let it be known how they are feeling or what they...
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    Summary of my book

    I think 3rd omniscient works better for my book. It is tough but I like that I can work with so many different POV, I think it enhances the story. And I have two main characters, twins. One does hold more spot light over the other but eventually, they will be of equal importance. I have...
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    Question about age gap

    Ive aged my characters to 18. I said screw it. I'll make them 18...2 years..whatever. I actually kinda like that more, I wanted to make it more adult like anyway and their age was causing a problem.
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    Summary of my book

    Thank you.
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    Summary of my book

    About the town, i didn't really think much into that as i havent really said much about it, kinda just was mentioned theres a small town near by. I was comsidering making the school located inside a town or near a town thats only for witches. But idk, i still got some stuff to work out so its as...
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    Summary of my book

    Replying to this first, I made a mistake, just meant regular non magic people, humans.
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    Summary of my book

    She was dating Michael, at that time would have been the former headmasters son. Michael is fairly young being around 50 himself to be a headmaster (at least I think) but anyway, that's why she was still associated with the school at that age. The school isn't in "another world" it's in the...
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    Summary of my book

    I don't know about the side scenes, it has to do with their Aunt, Michael (the Academies headmaster) and Rachael (the schools psychologist and Michael's wife of 12 years) something happened 14 years prior that made Jess leave and pretty much want to forget about being a witch. Obviously they end...
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    Summary of my book

    I've wrote up half of it pretty much but stuck now cause I feel I need to go back and revise everything before I can go on.
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    Summary of my book

    That was just a quick summary, there's actually ALOT to it.
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    Summary of my book

    I started doing this with no knowledge on writing. Like none lol, I wrote a lot, which isn't bad for not knowing how to do it at all but now I've done some actual research on writing and I'm like shit. There's some issues I need to work out. Just kinda overwhelmed. I don't plan on giving up...
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