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    Rebuilding My Fantasy Video Game's Synopsis

    There is a reason why I put stuff like eye orbs in my game/story, but I still can't explain them. My head still hurts from writer's block while trying to come up with explanations for the things I asked about in my first reply. I would appreciate it if anyone could come up with...
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    Rebuilding My Fantasy Video Game's Synopsis

    The story would be dispensed through cutscenes. Straight answer? Noted. I'll remember next time. Also, I saw the game design document outline template, and I've considered making one for my video game, but there are some things in the story/world that I still can't explain, like I've put these...
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    Rebuilding My Fantasy Video Game's Synopsis

    To me, it sounds like you really want to know about my game, so I might as well explain to you here: My game is 3D, and it can be played in either first-person or third-person (you can toggle between). Maybe it could also be considered hack and slash as the main characters tend to use melee...
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    Rebuilding My Fantasy Video Game's Synopsis

    I can see the eye orb being an artifact from these people, but my original vision of the eye orb was that it was a living being/entity. I guess my new vision is that while it's a stone artifact from these people, it could also be sentient, but for what reason? If the other smaller eye orbs that...
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    Rebuilding My Fantasy Video Game's Synopsis

    Hello, hello, helloooo. This is my second post on the forum. My first post was in May, so it really has been awhile since I've posted here. This is a follow-up on my fantasy video game which I talked about in my first post. Anyways, here's the situation: Between my first post and this new...
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    Non-literal definitions for words

    I have a feeling that y'all probably don't wanna hear any more about the autism comment, but I have to admit that I take serious offense to this as an individual with autism (and ADHD) who used to be a youtuber who was cyberbullied because of my disabillity, so I deleted my YT channel (even...
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    I Need Help Filling In "Holes" In Each Of My Protagonists' Backstories

    I remembered that Kitsunes look like foxes with multiple tails (I envision my character having three tails because one tail would make him look like a normal fox while two tails would make him look like Miles Tails Prower from Sonic) and that they have some magical/mystic power, but I didn't...
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    I Need Help Filling In "Holes" In Each Of My Protagonists' Backstories

    Hmmm... something for me to think about even though I feel like I might not change the stories. I get it though that it might seem stereotypical like how in the game, the males would have slow speed but more health while the females have fast speed but less health. Thank you very much for that...
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    I Need Help Filling In "Holes" In Each Of My Protagonists' Backstories

    Hello. First of all, thank you for your feedback and suggestions. Now, here's my response: I'm not sure how exactly would the insurrection have impacted her, but I wrote it in anyway as an explanation for how she managed to escape. She obviously used it as an opportunity to escape. She also...
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    I Need Help Filling In "Holes" In Each Of My Protagonists' Backstories

    Hello. First of all, thank you very much for the feedback and suggestions for some of the "holes". Now, here are my responses for some of the things you said: I feel like something I should have specified in the post is that all characters are supposed to be anthro/furry-types. So basically...
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    I Need Help Filling In "Holes" In Each Of My Protagonists' Backstories

    Hello, hello, helloooo. This is my first time on this forum, so this is basically my first post here. I'm pretty much more interested in getting my "holes" filled in than properly introducing myself in Introductions at the moment. When I feel like it, I'll introduce myself in Introductions...
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