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Naruzeldamaster reacted to Adam Scribentis's post in the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit? with
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"Said" can be overused and the writer may by all means seek out alternatives, but an honest "said" that fits is much better than a... -
Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread What Are You Playing Now?.finish a book and have it go viral (in a good way XD)
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread What Are You Playing Now?.That being said, with Xenoblade X always be sure to save before accepting an afinity quest. Some of them take you to dangerous places...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.I've heard that 'said' can be used as a 'crutch' but not much more than that. Then there's the 'red shirts' problem mentioned above...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.That's the concern lol I don't feel like I use it TOO much (to the point that it's an issue?) but like every second or third dialogue is...
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Naruzeldamaster reacted to skip.knox's post in the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit? with Like.
>use it less like others here have suggested. You can look elsewhere and find not merely suggestions but outright recommendations to use...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.Hmm, noted, as stated in my above post I just want to use them less as a 'crutch' and more as a proper tool. Same way with swears, I...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.The idea isn't exactly to 'kill' it, just to shave it off some and use it less like others here have suggested. Not so much a problem...
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I mean obvious answer is practice. And maybe reading some good books too. I'm doing a little better about it recently? but I'd still...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Description question.I've been trying to work on being less wordy but also trying to make use of stuff instead of 'he said' 'she said'
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Friends and family seems like a natural starting place, but unless they are fantasy readers, they probably wont really be interested. I...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Does anyone here have ADHD or ADD, and does that make you more creative?.I have some different disorders. But I feel like I do have some OCD Tendencies (Not the same as having the actual thing) cause I have a...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How much is too much worldbuilding?.Me when trying to justify Pizza and (potentially) frozen pizza existing in my Sci Fi / Fantasy world (It's more fantasy leaning than Sci Fi)
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread What inspired you to write?.My Wife (if I had one) would be either incredibly amused by one of my future stories or she'd wonder what kind of games I've played that...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread I Lego-ed for the first time in a GOOD while, and question?.Lego company has this whole 'dollar amount per piece' logic they like to roll with? But I dunno, they walk a fine line between 'extra'...