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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.I tend to do this a lot more often than I should, I don't know why but I feel the need to explain a character's emotions or thoughts on... -
Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Head hopping is sometimes used as a derogatory way to define a writing style in which the Point of View is shifted (keyword too) often...
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To be clear, I am aware that in excess, any writing thing is terrible for a story. Particularly if it's used poorly. I see a lot of...
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Not necessarily. Mixing first and third person isn’t uncommon if it’s clear and consistent. If the POV shifts make sense for the story...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Mixing first and third person?.Interesting, I don't think I'm advanced enough to use that technique yet (I'm still learning to tame my head hopping habit lol) I...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.As a more serious response to this thread, I'd say do whatever one you feel more comfy with, just be cautious of purple prose. It is a...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Hail, And well Met!.but but: Also welcome in. lol
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread What Are You Playing Now?.Same, I'm working on 4 right now and they're all chapter 3 ish.
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.I think the thing that spawned this thread is that I feel like I'm using it a lot? But like, it's weird, cause I'm trying to branch out...
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Naruzeldamaster reacted to Adam Scribentis's post in the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit? with
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"Said" can be overused and the writer may by all means seek out alternatives, but an honest "said" that fits is much better than a... -
Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread What Are You Playing Now?.finish a book and have it go viral (in a good way XD)
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread What Are You Playing Now?.That being said, with Xenoblade X always be sure to save before accepting an afinity quest. Some of them take you to dangerous places...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.I've heard that 'said' can be used as a 'crutch' but not much more than that. Then there's the 'red shirts' problem mentioned above...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.That's the concern lol I don't feel like I use it TOO much (to the point that it's an issue?) but like every second or third dialogue is...
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Naruzeldamaster reacted to skip.knox's post in the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit? with Like.
>use it less like others here have suggested. You can look elsewhere and find not merely suggestions but outright recommendations to use...