Recent content by Naruzeldamaster

Yeah, I knew it was something like that, somewhere around when ZZZ started they stopped listening to feed back entirely. Genshin itself is harmless though, outside of the VA strike thing. I find it hard to believe the fanbase was that 'wild' though (other than the obvious stuff related to...

That's the message I'm getting from ya'll here, provide the right context and just about any word is fine. That was kind of my experience with the medical term for having two colored irises. (I know what it is I just can't spell it off the top of my head) The commenter (Though only speaking...

Wait why does it have a bad rep? The game itself is fine (For the most part) There was the whole voice actor debacle that affected all three games. (But otherwise all three games are fine ish) I had to stop playing them because they were time/money sinks. But I enjoyed my time with them.

I'm writing some 'teens' (15-19) in my RWBY story (fanfiction) and while their personalities aren't entirely believable, they're much more in line with the Canon characters of that age range. I think that's more important than making them believable for real teens that age. They are still...

hello fellow fantasy lover Some of my fantasies may be a bit silly but they are fantasy regardless.

Interesting, that does make me feel better about one of my characters then. She's about 15 ish but has the personality (not the mind, just the personality traits) of like an 8 year old. BUT she has an extraordinary abundance of medical knowledge.(The admittedly hand wave-y excuse is that her...

I was told this in a different writing forum way back when, and just recently thought about it. I'm pretty sure the original question was about a passage where a character identified another by the fact that she had two different colored irises and used the scientific term for it and...not just...

Jokes aside you should actually do this sometime if you're writing a comedy story, it'd be funny. I think I'm struggling to write proper children (13 and under) because my 'social battery' can't take being around them. I have mild experience dealing with different types, but overall, my social...

I write them based on what little experience I have with actual children. Sometimes they have more 'smarts' because the plot requires them to. Otherwise I write them the way I've seen the (Good executed) ones get written. I'm struggling to write a character in hound and fox right now because I...

I think we were planning on moving on from that subject already but ye roger. Back on topic, I'm torn on naming unnamed characters (however big or small) because half of the time I don't know I'll bring them back or not. If a unnamed character returns a lot I'll eventually name them, but if...

I know I'm jumping the gun here a little bit but while we're on the topic, what would be a 'good' price for a first book? I was thinking $5-10 because I know I've been tempted by books in that price range before. I don't think my books will be 'lightning in a bottle' or anything but I want to...

Yep, and ask any 'special' person (Not saying this in a bad way, since I'm also on the spectrum) about their special interest, they'll often know more than most scholars on their subject. Most of the time they'll be more factually correct about it too. A good example of this was this one kid...

So, I'm considering putting my first book (Yes yes 'finish the thing first' I know lol goal is to finish the draft this year.) on amazon Kindle. What I want to know are three main things. I'm assuming Amazon takes a 'cut' of the profit? Similarly to how youtube gets a cut when you monetize a...

For now I think my game plan (When I properly finish a book, not just the draft) is to publish on amazon kindle. Will I make 'millions' off of that? who knows, my characters and worlds are driven by my funny bone and my funny bone is 'built different' than most other people. (I even throw...

I mean I could go with the moss / mushroom idea but have it that it's what the grubs eat (I think I will change them to grubs because nobody likes the sound/mental image of eating maggots, grubs at least sound like something you could eat.) and the way their body processes it is what turns it...