Recent content by rareruin

Monologues are interesting but i do feel it destroys the narrative process as well. Perhaps there is a better way around it. Good monologues i feel should provide that character's development. A few examples to replace or support the villain's case: A Diary or big revealing clue. The witness...

honestly yeah it's to goofy.

me too, I feel the same exact way.

Like Demon king Diamo, or blue exorcist?

I have to say I have not read the book, but I will say that this seems to be taking an old way of thinking about the world under heavy revisions, I like it. What Ki is in this world could almost be seen as the will of god. So, in Christianity, the book of John Genisus 1:1 it says God is the word...

Your right it is rough, i tried to explain this bit, but I was using earth as an example so just void the geography you can even void the generic magic system. The very point was to make an outline of somebody who struggles with society, an outcast system of sexuality urged on through profit...

Valkhir is done as a warrior, feeling dejected Anya finally ceases the moment and cheers her up... Now back at the capital we learn that they started a witch hunt for demonic priest from Anya's home, and this only escalates as Anya achieves many accolades in the name of the Empire. They make it...

So, I'm not going to write this story, It came to as I watched somebody doo-doo talking Xianxia Chinese high fantasy, to be fair he likes Wuxia, but Xianxia is like the mythological cultivator trend where everyone has dantian and there whole goal is to become an immortal with internal Qi... But...

(note the list is not a limitation nor does it have to be an existing fantasy sport) SPORTS: 0 gravity soccer Quidditch Robot Boxing Tron Poke battles Card battles Pod racers Chariots (Yugi-oh) Jousting (Pegasus) (mecha)

dump it in the translator and highlight important parts on your original to see if they need to be retranslated. Most auto translators are good at their job but, if you want to introduce more stylistic choices I wouldn't destroy the next 4-8 months writing the same book from scratch.

I have an abandoned story, so the elves dwarves humans and dragon born were all evolved from different chains of hominin. So Elves in this world are basically great white shark monkeys that no longer live in the ocean. They retained there primitive life span & live roughly 200+ years. These...

Yes, I was nervous at first but everyone here is very nice.

The language of Frogs is not necessary to learn but... you could... I created this language for Merfolk, i hope you like it. INDEX: 1 phonetics/alphabet 2 sentence structure 3 tenses and prefixes 4 Master Key (core roots of the language) 5 Simple Words Here is the Definitive Master...

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