Recent content by Remedian

Just as the tittle says. How do you write your story down. Should i write In a linear timeline first and then you edit it around so in the order that i want. Like on the first chapter id write the future situation of the characters, like fighting a dragon as a form of hook for the readers then...

Previous comments are right. 2nd one holds more weight to it. But first one does provides more context. Try combining both? Try to give more info while still puting weight and voice to it. I would want to read it if i know more info about it.

Hmm my approach right now is just creating a rough setting. As of now i only have a planet, a solid power system, lists of random powers 3 mc and 12 characters. After that i think ill just let the characters take it from there. I know not everyone writes the same but is my aproach good or nah?

Yeah, iam now trying to create a lil back story for those that iam planning to kill off. And let a few of them actually be part of the story Your exactly correct on that assumption lmao. I did pick just that number as theyre the characters i initially created before i even had the idea to...

Yeah, iam now trying to create a lil back story for those that iam planning to kill off. And let a few of them actually be part of the main storyline

Yes i realize that too and itll be hard to keep up with all of them. Imma kill half of them i think. Originally i started the story because of the 12 characters. I was planning on centering the story around them but decided against it later on. And just make them be the building blocks of the...

how to create your BBEG in a fantasy story, assuming you already created a world and have a rough idea of the history of it and its power system. then created the mcs to experience the world and some side characters that has some form of interaction with the mcs. but how would you come up with...

Thats a very helpful insight i do plan on killing some of them and just mention them in passing as tales or legends of some sort. And for the influence that very well might work. dissemination of information in a medieval setting would be slow, so it won't make enough of a difference for it to...

errm like hes a know it all type thing and just loves yapping. i should just kill this guy i think

where do you draw the line of info dumping for a character whose main characteristics is info dumping

when you have group of individual people. how would you write them down. as a stepping stones for the character? a hindrance, a helping hand? i have this 12 characters that i dont know how to fit in the story. all i know is somehow they ended up in the same world the mc did and they to came...

Imma go ahead and assume that the writing that you mean is the writing as a novel and creating a story around that power system. I think if you're not ready yet to write that story, then keep writing the magic system until you think its solid. just write it down until you know how it works, how...

Thank you on this. I'm confusing world building and storytelling, there might not be a need for 3 MC, but I want it to be a story of these 3 characters experiencing this world, I just have to create the context which drives the story telling. I'll just have to let the pen guide me to wherever...

I meant like if an extra character is taken out of the story it would not hinder the character to move from point A to point B, they would simply seek out another extra character. now on a pivotal character which if taken out of the equation, the story will collapse they would not be able to...

Really great first chapter. It hooked me early on. Iam not an expert in this but ill tell you how felt reading it so you can get feedback. Um the way they abducted the king was fast. it feels like theyre only separated by a wooden fence which the rider just hopped through went inside pushed a...