thats how i did it before ... but then I got critique saying it was draggy ... sadly ! so I changed the whole layout to honour and manage the critique in order to fix it !
hahaha its already my favourite book !
Dearest Author i wish to express my honour for your.... wonderfully Green ... book? about grass ?
You Shall not be forgotten !
:ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
maybe the book with 17 chapter describing grass could be called ....well grass hahaha or how to talk about grass then once they explain 17 chapters . well..it a hit wonder... lol jkjk
oh okie cool what if its just a small paragraph or something describing it ?
i had to adjust my novel for readilbility out where its like short paragraphs then break then pacing into the plot I don't like the layout but I guess it works better for some to understand better
im asking this qurestion because my story I've written has a lot of in-depth world building ! its almost like a dream ! but I'm wondering is that to much for readers?
Im ricconi! An artist and author, I'm on here looking for my community or some advice on my future ventures. I've written a novel called Geneara, which I love dearly. I also draw as a form of relaxation. Thank you for reading, hope ur well!