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We keep everything in Word and OneNote, and I strongly prefer to draft with one chapter per Word file, one folder per draft. That way... -
RoccO replied to the thread Help me resolve my Little Mermaid retelling.If it is a retelling, then it needs some of the same elements. You could kick Sebastian to Flounder and get away with it. I think if it...
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RoccO replied to the thread Too Many files!.I like OneNote and Word. I have so many files. I thought the thread would go in that direction. Over the years I never knew (what I was...
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RoccO replied to the thread Critique my setting - The Five Kingdoms.This is where I live. I’d like to live here. Yes, we all have mistakes, that is why you have hope. In the grand words of master chicken.
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RoccO replied to the thread On using LLMs in writing.It can only end badly. Tolkien was against industrialisation. We should have stopped at the dictionary and pirates. Taking it a...
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RoccO replied to the thread please, please read and critique my creation story..Creational stories are wide and varied. This one reminds me of Earthsea. There are spaces for creational epics I think. There are some...
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RoccO replied to the thread Funniest (But serious) Dialogue you've written?.Sometimes diversionary. I think of it as a late show. Someone looking over your shoulder being all serious. It also happens in sex. I...
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RoccO replied to the thread What do we think of POV writing?.There are three POV officially, but I think there are five. You forgot single 3rd person and narrator. So you have the same old ones...
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RoccO replied to the thread Is this success?.Getting turned down is worse. I have sent in the first four chapters of my books a few times with little success. Books become lethargic...
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RoccO replied to the thread Writing characters that are awkward about sex (or romance in general).There are some curious incest stories that deal with a lot of wordplay. I do not know if you call it lust, or desire, but they are...
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RoccO replied to the thread the greatest heroes that my fantasy world ever knew(from the inhabitants perspectives)..It sounds like the plot of Shadow of the Colossus, which had sequels, prequels, remakes, basically everything that peels like Star Wars...
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RoccO replied to the thread How to "show" instead of "tell" this aspect of my fantasy world?.I like to put in description, but it gets too long. There are some things I say that end up being an info dump and I always take it out...
