Recent content by Sammo2191

I think that your story sounds really good! I like the part about different dimension taking them back to the Victorian era and that magic and aliens exist!! This sounds like my kind of story!!

I think that the hardest part of writing any story is starting it. Does anyone have any tips on the best opening lines to get the readers hooked? The number of times that I have so many ideas all written out, and no way to start the story. I get fed up with the typical opening lines ie. It was...

I have a 'Prophecy' in one of my stories. I guess it depends on the way that you put it into the story. I would have to agree, it is slightly annoying when the prophecy pops up too soon and you are left feeling a little frustrated, especially if the 'hero' hasn't done anything yet, or if they...

Thank you Futhark, that is really helpful. That was the issue i was coming up against, because of the opposites already existing, it was hard to create new ones. I like the idea of the darker aspect of the original elements. Earth = Umbra Earth Water = Black Water = Fire = Shadow Fire Air =...

Hey guys, I am super new to this and have never posted anything for help on one of these forums before, so I hope I am doing it the right way. I am writing a book to do with Gods/Goddesses and witches, I am following a similar path of the Wiccan religion but with my twist on it; I have only...

My first thought when you said about the witch taking the children, what if she took a part of their youth/life force to return her own youth? You said that she was a hag. Is there a backstory about the way she became what she is? Or is she just an old bitter woman? Do you intend to keep her on...

Hey there, My name is Sam, and I am new to these Forums; I had never used one before and was looking for a place to talk to others who are interested in writing, especially fantasy/fiction. I am hoping that this is a place where i can talk to like-minded people to be able to ask opinions and...