With details? A line-by-line markup??
Really? You don't agree so you're name-calling? Where are the new people coming from where that sort of thing is acceptable?
I write profiles, but only after the story is written. I have character sheets for each of the major characters and recurring minor characters....
Yeah, they're called women... Oh! Or ex-husbands. true. I can get a lot of people to say my work is good, but it's pulling teeth to get them to...
this is the one I use. All the time.
I do this all the time. I like to keep going when I'm trying to complete a thought, and when the thoughts start piling up on me I have to put them...
Good idea!
Seriously? The stuff you list kind of sounds like the Nazis. Or rather a Nazi utopia. Sounds like the world we live in now. ;)
If you're having problems with the opening, it's probably because nothing is happening at the beginning and even you don't want to read about it....
Now that's the kind of editing I like. :) I like to find acquaintences who don't really like me. I've found that they tend to be harsher critics...
I was at the dentist with my son once. He was in getting tortured while I waited in the waiting room. It was a nice place, with a jungle gym for...
That's the logic I run with. The only words not in English are those that wouldn't have a direct translation.
If you liked Angel, you'll like Buffy. I was surprised at getting addicted to it, but the twists were great. Watch it. And if you haven't seen...
Buffy had some excellent writing. Firefly did too. Not just the dialog, though that was great.
Well, thanks. Now I know what I'm going to be doing on the way home from the plant. Maybe I'll wait until after I've turned in my badge......