In Terhia (my worldbuilding project), naming conventions reflect how each culture defines identity, belonging, and authority. There are six distinct traditions:
Menneske (Scandinavian-inspired): Personal name + settlement, such as Aslaug of Stenhavn. Identity is rooted in place, household, and...
it shows high conceptual originality and narrative potential, weaknesses would be expository clarity and critical rigor of the analysis, which seems to be what you are working on now. you're moving in the right direction, imo. nice work so far.