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  1. The Dark One

    What was hard to write?

    I've always been complimented on how well I write women but I've never written a female 1st person POV. The opportunity has just come up to do so and I'm already feeling very self conscious about it - after a page and a half.
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    Unredeemable Tropes

    Not to mention the fact that humour is a spectrum and everyone's sense of it will be different. Writing humour comes easily to me but that doesn't mean my characters are always cracking jokes. It means (mostly) that the expression of the narrative is wry/full of irony and understatement/and the...
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    Unredeemable Tropes

    Disagree strongly. Setting up a twist can take any form you choose and if that hapens to be in a joke, so be it.
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    Unredeemable Tropes

    What's fridging?
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    fat characters

    You'll break the internet with a question like that.
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    fat characters

    Or am I a bot myself? Who can tell...
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    fat characters

    I have to say (and I've suggested this to one or two regulars) that there are threads and posts over the last few months which have the whiff of AI bots about them. Do we know for sure everyone is human?
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    Using the "Story circle" for every chapter?

    Template shows and therefore becomes predictable and ostensibly formulaic - which you do not want. Prose distinguished from others is precisely what I aspire to. I've written crime, historical and sci-fi but it's always my voice and regular readers tell me all my books feel similar despite the...
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    Using the "Story circle" for every chapter?

    Jeez... to do that every chapter? Not only would it be a chore to write, it would become sooooo predictable.
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    Humour me, can anyone explain different avenues of publishing to me?

    She's a proper agent so she doesn't get paid unless the book sells. I think the difference this time is that she's taken on an unpublished work that she likes and challenged me to make the ending work better (which I've now done). My previous two agents took me on for future works after I'd...
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    If I'd only known...

    My sister described my first (never published) book as one long poem. I thought it was a work of genius when I finished it, but these days I can't read three sentences without vomiting blood.
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    If I'd only known...

    Reflecting on this... and looking back over what I regard as my writing development, trying to make every line zing when I first started was a big mistake. Now I try to make every chapter zing but every line is exhausting - for both writer and reader. There has to be a comfortable matrix of...
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    Humour me, can anyone explain different avenues of publishing to me?

    The thing about agents - and I'm so aware of this going into my third relationship - is that they (quite legitimately) spend most of their time pushing the clients that they KNOW will make them money. I have no issue with that (despite being burned in the past). Maybe this time they'll push me?
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    Amazon reviews help

    I didn't report on experience. I reported on what I suspected would happen, given human nature.
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    Humour me, can anyone explain different avenues of publishing to me?

    Pleased to announce that I've accepted an offer from an agent, today. It is so hard to get an agent in Oz because there are only a handful. Mine happens to be one of the more high profile specimens so I'm quite delighted about it. She was very complimentary about my new ms and spent a long time...
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