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Help me resolve my Little Mermaid retelling
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Well, the conflict is that Nerine's parents look down on her hanging out with a human, or in other words the caste hierarchy that keeps...
Feb 16, 2026
Trailofstardust
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Help me resolve my Little Mermaid retelling
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World Building
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I've got a personal project which is kind of a retelling of The Little Mermaid, set in a world based on the Bronze age mediterranean. In...
Feb 12, 2026
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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While this isn't the idea I had in mind, Ive actually already got an idea for an antagonist by now, I think it's interesting to compare...
Feb 5, 2026
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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I already said that this premise wont work.
Feb 5, 2026
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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What do you mean by "villain of her own story"? I would like you do elaborate. Do you mean being a villain who doesn't realize it, or...
Feb 3, 2026
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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Back to the djinn, she wouldn't be a good antagonist because she's trapped inside a cave for the entire story until the climax, and...
Jan 20, 2026
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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Thanks for the suggestion, and although I initially envisioned my story as a "fantasy kitchen sink" setting, I don't think a kitsune...
Dec 31, 2025
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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Sorry for being confrontative, I meant no harm. I will take it into consideration to try to be gentler in the future.
Dec 30, 2025
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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As others have stated, "genie" and "djinn" aren't different types of creatures, "genies" are the westernized depiction of djinn, who are...
Dec 28, 2025
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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That is a good question to wonder, though my question is about finding an antagonist before that happens.
Dec 28, 2025
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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The djinn is trapped inside a cave until the climax of vashti's story, because her entire arc is about killing the king and she needs...
Dec 28, 2025
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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I'm in a state of considering your suggestion, even if I'm not sure it fits. The problem is that I don't see a reason for anyone in...
Dec 27, 2025
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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She doesn't, and I don't know how having a son would change anything. Besides the fact that Vashti is so young at the beginning of her...
Dec 27, 2025
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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No one in court knows that. By the time Vashti decided that she wants to kill the king, she has been far away from the Royal Court for...
Dec 26, 2025
Trailofstardust
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Plz help me come up with an antagonist for my story
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She wants to kill the king specifically.
Dec 24, 2025
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