The problem I always have with runic magic systems that nobody even bothers to explain their origins. What makes these arbitrary lines and shapes...
Aaaah. Y'all are thinking about a REALISTIC laser rifle. Yeah, that's a bit different. Although OP called them "laser rifles," they also said that...
I would like to contest this point. What is essentially a hand grenade that could explode anywhere behind enemy lines with no warning every three...
Perhaps the carrier has a double-hulled catamaran style design. When the hunters are picked up, they just maneuver into the "bay" between the two...
Spoilers I guess, but Fight Club.
Just mention their dark skin in their character description. Or even just don't mention their skin color at all if it doesn't matter to the story....
Perhaps they spend so much time trying to keep the chaos god at bay that they usually just don't have time to deal with humanity.
The Lost Gate by Orson Scott Card has something pretty similar.
Maybe use the phrase "Two sides of the same coin."
Just make sure it's not just a "token" flaw. Make the flaw have actual meaningful consequences for him. Also, one point that I disagree with in...
