I wanted to upload my first chapter for opinions but it the site won't allow even the First part to be uploaded....any help?
"Secondly, there was YoShoKenDai the Dragon, who was ambitious and powerful."
I have a lot of things I am toying with to give context to my story...I have recently gave myself a time till which the story NEEDS to conclude by..which is good...as such I've included the month, year and day in my chapter introductions...but I only specify it when there is a perspective...
You are Chrystalline a Litainian child of Arkhanithies, a Silver Blood,". You wield sacred arcane abilities that are unmatched throughout the Triverse! You have been integrated into Austian society and work with them to protect their world...you fight alongside them against the Demons that...
You are an Angel, A grey blood born with wings to grace the heavens and talons and a weapon..to bring it down. Son of Arkhanithies you're destined to protect The Earth you ally with no Earthling your duty is clear, your will unwavering. You live to protect the earth at all costs from any that...
You are Nomadica the Witch child of Geovah'd The Man Spurned by the humans you use curses to destroy the humans who stole your world from you..due to your close resemblance to them you spy on the humans attacking them whilst they lie unaware . You will reclaim the world you've lost
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You Are Banten, Son of Yodai the Deity, You are Jetician who has full control over the concept of Space Born on Jetpakk in the district of Jentar. You exist to balance the Power of Time and to defeat Death, You are a Fo'kai a warrior who lives to keep the world in harmony.
"Secondly, there...