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  • Zilver
    Zilver replied to the thread Feedback wanted.
    I think I quite like it, but the way it is now feels very... wordy. Especially a blurb should catch me in as little words as you can, or...
  • PinkerPunk
    PinkerPunk replied to the thread info dumping character?.
    I think info-dumping characters can be fun to have in a book, especially if they ARE right but the other characters are so annoyed with...
  • pmmg
    pmmg replied to the thread Hello All.
    Howdy pinker. Welcome here.
  • PinkerPunk
    PinkerPunk posted the thread Hello All in Introductions.
    Excuse me while I spread my wings and get used to everything. I've written alone for so long, I'm looking forward to finally engaging in...
  • Matt Devitt
    Matt Devitt replied to the thread Feedback wanted.
    Here is my third version. Feedback would be appreciated. Thanks to everyone! From a slave, to a soldier, to a king…that is Fletcher...
  • pmmg
    Matt makes some good points. Id say it as dont neglect that the world itself is a character. It needs its own heart. Since the subject...
  • Kassandra
    Kassandra replied to the thread Howdy.
    Hello, Tuesday! Welcome here.
  • Kassandra
    Hello, Tropicguardian! Welcome here. 😁
  • Kassandra
    What a beautiful thread! Last week, I had minimum progress on my getting stuck at the mid-point of my story, but! I kept my focus on it...
  • Kassandra
    Kassandra replied to the thread WRITING a magic system..
    So, all of your magic is elemental magic. I have a few questions about it. When you say "elemental magic," do you mean...
  • Kassandra
    Kassandra replied to the thread info dumping character?.
    If this is how their personality is, then simply stay true to that character and portray them as is. You can, of course, have other...
  • Kassandra
    Thank you for the tips. As I write my first book, it's also my first time building a world on such a large scale. Recently, I realized I...
  • T
    My 'Empire' series is linear - mostly. I use a 'one POV character, one chapter' format. There are four main POV characters whose tales...
  • minta
    minta replied to the thread Feedback wanted.
    I would go with description 2. It is tighter, more character-driven and gives a stronger sense. D1 also good with worldbuilding but 2...
  • minta
    You can write linear first and rearrange later.
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