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Gurkhal replied to the thread How much is too much worldbuilding?.I would say from personal experience of my own writing in that when you world build instead of writing the story you set out to write... -
Hello everyone, My name is Samuel, and I’m a book editor and reader who genuinely loves helping writers bring their ideas to life. I... -
Samuel_the_critique replied to the thread Hello fellow scribes!.Hello everyone, My name is Samuel, and I’m a book editor and reader who genuinely loves helping writers bring their ideas to life. I...
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A. E. Lowan replied to the thread Writing in tense situations.Finishing is not what makes one a writer. Writing does. All else is process. Some processes are slower than others. Keep at it... -
Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.I don't do google links. Just post a snippet or email it to me for a brief review. My gut tells me: If you are in classical 3rd Om... -
Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.It's a pejorative for a reason, as it isn't simply switching POV. It's an error in switching POV.
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skip.knox replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.I find it more useful for myself not to call it head hopping. The phrase is pejorative from the start. It's switching the point of view... -
Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.Hmm, I could post the chapter once it's finished (It's a chapter with 4 of the main party involved in the story and there's a lot of POV... -
Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.It's one of those things, it's hard to tell if it's working without seeing it.
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.As I've said earlier in the thread, it's a little more controllable when it's only two/three main characters (Doesn't happen as...
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A. E. Lowan replied to the thread Story Fuel: The Princess Dress Edition.I'm writing a masquerade ball in this book, so I've been a bit dress-obsessed of late. lol Our characters are going as Lewis Carroll...
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A. E. Lowan replied to the thread How to 'kill' the he said/she said habit?.I love this breakdown. Well thought out.
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Demesnedenoir replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.It's hard as hell to catch sometimes, most risky for me when writing one POV with another POV character in the scene, LMAO. That feels...
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Naruzeldamaster replied to the thread Is "Head Hopping" Good or Bad?.I tend to do this a lot more often than I should, I don't know why but I feel the need to explain a character's emotions or thoughts on...
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TThinkerX replied to the thread Dense Prose or Rich Prose?.I did that in 'Exiles: Pilgrimage.' One of the characters settled down with her toddler in a human village (the only one for thousands...