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  • EnriqueMontes
    I am Enrique Montes, a 28 year old average Joe working on a passion project. Looking forward to grow and evolve with you guys, and I...
  • RoccO
    RoccO replied to the thread HBO trailer HP.
    I for one am going to park on the couch, have those couple of beers, and wonder what the dementors are going to look like, bound see a...
  • D
    Oh, not far off. Make that a hobbit with menopause, there you have it. :D
  • D
    Well met. No, not yet. I'm just reading about writing for now. I'm in some sort of a changing phase. Nothing interesting or bad, but I...
  • JLiana
    JLiana replied to the thread First or third person?.
    Thank you, I'll give this a read! 😊
  • Mad Swede
    Mad Swede replied to the thread First or third person?.
    OK JLiana, now that Malik has gone into the POV details better than I can I'm going to give you a suggestion. Rewrite your story in...
  • JLiana
    JLiana replied to the thread First or third person?.
    My thinking is that my MC definitely needs someone to push against her in a way that challenges her worldviews, attitudes, etc. She has...
  • Prince of Spires
    Prince of Spires replied to the thread First or third person?.
    If it's just an idea you're having that it could be cool to have teh guy's POV included, then ignore that idea and just keep writing. In...
  • Karlin
    Karlin replied to the thread First or third person?.
    I don't conciously think about any of this, so I don't have a "bitch of a time". I didn't take writing courses, or read stacks of "how...
  • Mad Swede
    Mad Swede replied to the thread History and AI.
    I wonder if you understand. The LLM can identify data which in some way differs from other data in the data set. But this is ONLY done...
  • Prince of Spires
    Prince of Spires replied to the thread Writing styles!.
    In my experience everyone has a unique approach to writing. Everyone's different, which is why all we can do to help someone is suggest...
  • Prince of Spires
    Prince of Spires replied to the thread History and AI.
    It lied or was mistaken about its own methods. An LLM isn't trained to reason in the same way a human is. It's taught to give the most...
  • Malik
    Malik replied to the thread First or third person?.
    NGL, as a pantser you're likely gonna have a real bitch of a time choosing the correct POV to deliver your theme and subtext if you...
  • P
    Penpilot replied to the thread First or third person?.
    I've read books with two main characters told using 1st. You just have to make it clear at the beginning of each section which character...
  • JLiana
    JLiana replied to the thread First or third person?.
    So far I've written in first person subjective with a little interior monologuing. I think I'd write it in third omniscient to retain...
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