chell192
Dreamer
I am currently writing a story I have had in my head for years and i finally have the plot i want. Only problem...I have different races and need help building up on them. My story revolves around something like Sword Art Online only in my story the players are transported into the game, kind of like their actual bodies (so if they die their dead)..yea haven't quite figured out how i want that to go yet, I'm taking one step at a time...
a lot of my races are general:
Mage
Elf
Summoners
Demons (I don't think I'll add angels...that feels a little cliche'?)
This is all i've been able to think of...i need to get info on really good races with descriptions..i've been researching for two days now and haven't been too satisfied with what exactly i want.
Basically i want the races to be able to have different abilities but i really want to focus on the main 20 something characters. i don't mind some of them being the same.
In the story the main character is a sweet girl, her appearance is that of a elf but she doesn't necessarily belong to the elf tribe(or however i end up naming them) i want this character to be a mystery to herself. She doesn't exactly know her race, or she is a very rare race....haven't decided that either. Eventually during a battle she dies..unknown to the players they get another chance and are sent to an underworld and have to achieve a certain criteria before the game lets them return, she ends up seeing her killer in the underworld and achieves that criteria during their fight. During this time she ends up being a controller of dark magic, her character turns from the sweet smiling personality to being more mature and realizing how others are using the game for ill intentions, creating a darker character. I've thought of her actually being a rare demon half-breed race maybe? With that is how her character is able to use dark magic. This character is the hardest one for me to figure out and be happy with.
I have about 6-8 characters i want to be completely different and i'm having difficulty in deciding these races, and naming them.
I apologize for poor grammar or being ridiculously out of order this is a fast type up lol
Please any feed back would be helpful!
a lot of my races are general:
Mage
Elf
Summoners
Demons (I don't think I'll add angels...that feels a little cliche'?)
This is all i've been able to think of...i need to get info on really good races with descriptions..i've been researching for two days now and haven't been too satisfied with what exactly i want.
Basically i want the races to be able to have different abilities but i really want to focus on the main 20 something characters. i don't mind some of them being the same.
In the story the main character is a sweet girl, her appearance is that of a elf but she doesn't necessarily belong to the elf tribe(or however i end up naming them) i want this character to be a mystery to herself. She doesn't exactly know her race, or she is a very rare race....haven't decided that either. Eventually during a battle she dies..unknown to the players they get another chance and are sent to an underworld and have to achieve a certain criteria before the game lets them return, she ends up seeing her killer in the underworld and achieves that criteria during their fight. During this time she ends up being a controller of dark magic, her character turns from the sweet smiling personality to being more mature and realizing how others are using the game for ill intentions, creating a darker character. I've thought of her actually being a rare demon half-breed race maybe? With that is how her character is able to use dark magic. This character is the hardest one for me to figure out and be happy with.
I have about 6-8 characters i want to be completely different and i'm having difficulty in deciding these races, and naming them.
I apologize for poor grammar or being ridiculously out of order this is a fast type up lol
Please any feed back would be helpful!