globalbergonzi
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I have a scene, the very first scene after a two-scene prologue, where I have a Sergeant inspecting a Corporal's troops. I can post a snippet of their dialogue if requested. I'm just wondering if I have the ranks right and if it makes sense in the real world. If anything seems off in what I've just described, let me know. Also my story isn't military fantasy or military SF. The scene is only 480 words.
Thanks in advance
—Michael Bergonzi
Thanks in advance
—Michael Bergonzi